Vulnerability…
Vulnerability…
Spilling my heart into the sand.
Baring my chest to the passion,
And pain…
Like a ship aflame, in the wind of my soul.
Wind cutting through,
Cuts through,
Like ice through my flesh.
Spilling my heart into the sand.
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© 2005 Mirror aka @as-i-see-it (All rights reserved)
fantastic poetry.
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Just impressive! Congrats!
Thank you very much for your comment!
I am happy that you like it! :-)
Lovely poem:)I feel it in my heart
Salamat po for your comment!
I really appreciate that you have said this.
Thank you! :-)
i like your post my friend
Thank you very much! Truly I appreciate your saying that you like it. :-)
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