My First Poem : Give life Please One More Try

Give life please one more try....!
In hardest of the hard you must not Die..!
Arise , awake and leave some mark....!
Don't think about light and dark...!
Be strong and never cry...!
Give life please one more try..!

Listen to the nature and its silence..!
Life is more and more about balance...!
See the cloud fading in the sky...!
Give life please one more try...!

who care's for pain and pleasure...!
when goal is almost closer...!
Bounce back and never shy...!
Give life please one more try...!

past future is dream of mine...!
this moment is only shine...!
talk to the problem and say good bye..!
Give life please one more try...!

Hello my steemit friends this is my first poem in english....today i have written , i am very very happy .

Thanks to all my steemit friends
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