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RE: The Sotto Voce of Happiness - (an attempt at a poem)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

I hung on to this poem, for I had a feeling I have not expressed it exactly as I wish it to be...but nothing new comes and I cannot see where it fails.

So, here it is, maybe you'll sense what I am searching for, or maybe I am just imagining the lack...

I hope it lights up at least a tiny corner of your mind with joyful images.