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RE: Pearlescent Poems # 3: Black Brimstones
Fantastic work bredren! The flow was great, the gifs and images helped create pauses and breaks that helped feed the tone really well. As always, your use of imagery throughout the piece of work is wonderfully well done.
Some skeletal closets need much more than sage
Favorite line^
Beautiful.
Thank you very much for the in depth comment @alchemage everyone, including you, have been inspiring me to write more and more, and the best part is finding the imagery that can best compliment and tether to my lyrics. I appreciate the continued support. Thanks again