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RE: True Love Have I Known [Original Poetry]

in #poetry8 years ago

Wow. Powerful. This poem gave me goosebumps. Your imagery and word choice is PHENOMENAL. The rhythm and format flowed beautifully.

Unstructured meaning filtering joy to the unfettered soul

This is my favorite line. I cannot explain the image that comes in my head very well, but its like a chaotic spiderweb being drawn into the center of a person's head as they move forward through life unconditionally.

Thank you for sharing.

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And thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I'm glad you shared what you liked from the poem. I often get imagery just bursting out wanting to be put into words, and that isn't always easy. How to convey imagery and symbolism with words and not sound cliche? I love the image you perceive from these words. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts with me.

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