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RE: Steemit Poetry Contest #5 Entry - "Ambitious Fish"

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)
There is a puzzle I wish I could solve;

In the dark, you'll find

The answers you seek
Like a spark, in your mind
A power will speak


The verses are perfect and the rhyme is great. Awesome rhythm. Was almost sing-songing as I read! Bravo!

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Awesome! Thank you so much for your feedback! And I love the verse. I like to reply in verse as well. I'll follow you for sure!

Awwn thanks. I'll follow back

Oh, and if you want to put your verse skills to the test, I'm running a little Sonnet Contest. We'd love to have you!

Sonnets! I love em but they kinda take me days to write. I'll check out your contest though and hopefully bring friends along

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