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RE: insight - Original poem - 100 Days poetry challenge Day #16

in #poetry7 years ago

Butterflies in the light, we're all going to burn.

What a delightfully scary piece. I set out to critique this home but I couldn't figure out a way to do that considering I wouldn't change a thing. You might have to get someone else to critique this. I think I'm biased. LOL. Great job.

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For me, your consideration is an honor, @acousticsteveo. I respect your opinion very much and it moves me to have touched your sensibility. Thanks for your comment, it really encourages me to improve.

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