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RE: The Golden Rule - Day 15

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

I really enjoyed the spiritual message of this poem. One thing I would suggest would be to go back through it and see if there are places where you might need to add a comma because you leave the, out at times in the middle of a line where it seems like it would be appropriate, and later use it at times which makes the earlier leaving out a little awkward.

No wisdom here it is just what we do
Here's an example of a sentence that might be better served with a comma.

I could be wrong about this entirely, but I thought I'd bring it up so you could look at it yourself critically.

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I see what you mean. I tend to overuse commas though, so I try to undercompensate sometimes.

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