I really enjoy the purity of simple language in this poem you did well in expressing your ideas. I could tell this poem was written by someone who does not have a lot of experience with the English language, but this for me does not detract at all. In fact it kind of gives the poem a flavor that I particularly like. Keep up the good work. Don't worry about writing English in a polished way at this point. I think you have a good enough grasp that what you're saying comes through beautifully.