Thanks abmakko. You have touched on the best part of the poem. I wanted it to be like meditation, where you look at the bamboo forests and have thoughts about it etc then eventually just quieten the thoughts and merge with the growth of the grass. Like a transcendance. Maybe a lofty goal but I gave it a shot ;-) cheers for checking out my poem
Thanks abmakko. You have touched on the best part of the poem. I wanted it to be like meditation, where you look at the bamboo forests and have thoughts about it etc then eventually just quieten the thoughts and merge with the growth of the grass. Like a transcendance. Maybe a lofty goal but I gave it a shot ;-) cheers for checking out my poem