poemchallenge by @margaretwise: "The loneliness lady"
She does not find anyone to talk, only thinks,
her imagination leads her to dream that in the midst of a crowd she will be,
surrounded by many people, and she will be at the front;
She observes arriving at night charged with many reproaches,
It did not take him all day to achieve what he wanted,
tired look at the sky, which shines with stars,
She also observes the moon, the radiant stars,
all around her.
Smiling is going his bed the loneliness lady,
and her hope grows, after all,
it is the last thing that dies.
I hope the lady would be in 'loneliness' for only temporarily!
Cheers.
As it says the end of the writing: "Smiling is going his bed the loneliness lady,
and her hope grows, after all,
it is the last thing that dies". :)
Thank you! I was rather confused by the pronouns and structure! Poetry is too high for me!
None of that, sometimes you need something more to understand what an author really wants to express, and more when the writing is translated from its original language, it happens to me often, so do not worry and thanks for writing.
My Congratulations and thank you for taking a break from everyday worries. Poetry arises from a particular sensitivity and from the need to express in a personal way, its relation to the world and to itself in the form of words that purify the soul.
Great writing I am honored @margaretwise
https://steemit.com/poemchallenge/@margaretwise/poemchallenge-results-by-margaretwise-poetry-is-a-form-of-self-therapy
Hello dear, thank you very much for your recognition I am very happy for this, many blessings for you.