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Hahaha! Sos, don't worry. Way problema. A critique will do :) I wonder kon unsa imo/inyong thoughts about my poem. :D

I appreciate poetry pero dli nako siya forte. Hehehe so i’ll leave it to the experts about sa pag critic. My thoughts? Well written, makahunahuna na noun kos kahimtang sa iligan sauna nga lambo kaau. Karun, awh padulongay pero kailangan japon ug dout. Unta mahapsay na ang tanan ug wala untay mangurakot hahaha layoa nakog naabtan uy 😂

See! Ingon dili expert. Ka-humble ba god oy. Hahaha. Salamat, salamat.

Hahahaha thoughts raman na 😂

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