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RE: Love For Juana

in #poem6 years ago

"when you smile it's like the sun has been split in two"

"When you touch me, there is a condensation of emotional ions spiraling at the speed of light"

The huge levels of cosmic romanticism, in these lines, bring tears to my eyes.

I don't know why.

One of my favorite songs is "Cosmic Love" by Florence and the Machine. The chorus goes like this:

"The stars, the moon, they have all been blown out
You left me in the dark
No dawn, no day, I'm always in this twilight
In the shadow of your heart."

This part kills me, and when I saw Florence perform this song live at Hammersmith Apollo, I was struck by weeping that, like a waterfall, would not stop. :-0

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How sweet of you to share this, thank you so much, im glad my poetry could instigate such reflection., I love that you feel and appreciate good romantic lines as in the music too

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