(POEM5) NEVER LET ME GO

in #poem8 years ago (edited)

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When I say I'm alright,
i want u to ask me one more time,
"Are you sure?"
When I say never mind,
I want you to say
"No I'm still interested".
When I say leave me alone,
I want you to quietly sit
and place my head on ur laps.
When I say its over,
I want you to say
" No I can feel ur heart,
And it still beats for me".
WRITTEN BY PARAMIND

#ParamindPoem

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I was feeling a little lovey-dovey this morning when i wrote this short poem. I decided to forget about rhymes and poetic dictions and just decribe how i feel in plain simple words.

More dope poems like this from my steemit blog:
(1) Tough Times
(2) Hell of A Trip
(3) Two More Rounds To Go (+18)
(4) Rape
(5)To my awesome Dad

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This is really fresh @paramind. I hope you have more words for your emotions stunners. You're on fire!!

Thanks alot @kofibeatz you don't know how much your comment means to me. I didn't think anyone was seeing my posts.

The only one who sees your post consistantly is the Father. He's the only one you need and He loves you..

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