Why the clouds change colour - Poem
One day after work when I had some free time a friend provided me with a prompt to write a poem.
Why the clouds change colour
This first poem was written in 2 minutes and hasn’t been edited.
The Bridal Sun
It shines through a pearl veil
It breaches with colour
Pink then gold then violet
Only the rain makes the sky like charcoal
But on a quiet day
Nothing but white
Or nothing at all
They then challenged me to develop this poem further. As there has been the new Haiku contest by @bananafish out recently I decided to transform it into a haiku, however it turned into a three verse haiku.
The Bridal Sun - Haiku Edition
Dusk dusted pearl veil
Pink then gold then violet sky
And nothing at all
Stormless halcyon
Cloaks heavens quiet patter
Undisturbed stars
Morning mourning shawl
From charcoal to fair chroma
An untouched canvas
Thank You to @Calluna for the beautiful prompt.
Image from Pixabay
Find the latest Mizo No Oto Haiku contest here
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Beautiful!
I have added this post to my curation page I have started doing for School of Minnows.
https://steemit.com/steemit/@cerysrussel/cerys-curates-17-09-2018
Well written and very visual.
Thanks for sharing your poem. I tried some of that when I was younger but I failed miserably.
I have found your post because @stever82 featured you in his entry for The Pay It Forward Contest
Well done!
Most would be satisfied with a single poem, but you give us two. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
I'm here because @stever82 featured you in this week's Pay it Forward curation contest. Keep up the great work!
HI @gaby-crb, your post has been nominated in Pay-It-forward and nice peom you have written
Cheers
Dropping by and supporting your post @gaby-crb, due to the entry of it, by @stever82, into our Pay It Forward Community's weekly curation contest. As part of the @pifc community, we would encourage you to check into it.
Wow. Impressive creative talent applied to poetry!
In no matter in what direction they are applied!
Well done gaby-crb! I really enjoyed your work reading through this post.
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I enjoyed your poem @gaby-crb, but just noticed it's past post payout! oops :) I found it because @stever82 featured you in our Pay it Forward Curation Contest ; you should consider joining us this week with an entry of your own :)