what more? (orig poem) who or what?
what more?
more light, but it blinds you,
what more? to ask for,
more water, won't it drown you?
what more? to ask for,
more love, won't it kill you?
.
a little goes a long way,
perfect balance, strength to have,
willpower to move, to open that door,
to courage, where a brighter day,
awaits you...
.
take a step, be closer
may your face
meet not a poser's
but a dear friend,
whom with smile,
will you greet.
closer to reality than fiction,
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I enjoyed this piece, keep writing! Now, of course it's your choice, but you might consider shifting the wording of this slightly:
into this:
which is what I think you meant to say :-)
Oh yeah, and the centering issue can be caused by a few different things. The most often, I find, is not ending your tags cleanly. Always start a new center tag for each part: so it should be
<center><h3>what more?</h3> by @franciferrer</center>(make sure the tags are exactly in that order. if they are
<h3><center></h3></center>it will mess things up.)and then put your image. If you need to re-center your image, put new
<center>and</center>before and after the image.oh so complicated. Thank you for the pointer! i did what i could lol.
and yes it does sound better with poser's thanks again!
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