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RE: what more? (orig poem) who or what?

in #poem6 years ago

I enjoyed this piece, keep writing! Now, of course it's your choice, but you might consider shifting the wording of this slightly:

may your face meet's not a poser,

into this:

may your face
meet not a poser's

which is what I think you meant to say :-)

Oh yeah, and the centering issue can be caused by a few different things. The most often, I find, is not ending your tags cleanly. Always start a new center tag for each part: so it should be

<center><h3>what more?</h3> by @franciferrer</center>

(make sure the tags are exactly in that order. if they are <h3><center></h3></center> it will mess things up.)

and then put your image. If you need to re-center your image, put new <center> and </center> before and after the image.

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oh so complicated. Thank you for the pointer! i did what i could lol.
and yes it does sound better with poser's thanks again!

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