What has befalling me ?
My end is come to my beginning,
My strength I relied is weakening,
But upon you oh! man I'll keep deceiving,
Lest you'll recognize and treat me as a fallen being.
@admiralsp you keep amazing me. Your poetic skills have really improved and I'm loving it.
The peom is wonderful with good literary techniques. Keep it up and I know you'll keep soaring higher.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks bro, we're just getting started. Sky is the limit.