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RE: FALLING ANGEL by @admiralsp

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

What has befalling me ?
My end is come to my beginning,
My strength I relied is weakening,
But upon you oh! man I'll keep deceiving,
Lest you'll recognize and treat me as a fallen being.

@admiralsp you keep amazing me. Your poetic skills have really improved and I'm loving it.

The peom is wonderful with good literary techniques. Keep it up and I know you'll keep soaring higher.

Thanks for sharing.

Happy Steeming

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Thanks bro, we're just getting started. Sky is the limit.

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