The Silent Poem

in #poem8 years ago (edited)

Post written, eyes nil,
Air comments and votes still waiting
So frustrating, finger tips aching

Laptop screen staring
Same page poem frozen,
Erosion, but no explosion

Clock hand checking, tock tick
Must have grit,
To make it through this difficult bit.

Give up not thinking,
Poem perhaps stinking?
Time will explain,
This hard-fought strain


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Nice poem....

I followed you for more poems and great posts like this...

Thanks I like to write poems in my own style with no rules so I appreciate the nice comments.

Its Great Chief....

You welcome

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Your style of written poem is so realistic ...
The First 3 lines of poem is quite common for me, when i login into steemit after seeing my posts.

Yes I know the feeling, but keep persevering,
One day will come ,
When haters are none,
And Steem dollars will run
Megaton.

Thanks for reading

Wow you have a lot of talent!

Thanks, I only started few weeks ago but I just enjoy writing in my own style, writing what I want, how I want not really following any rules as such.

anxiety? Jajajaja, very good happens to me.
Muy bueno. Felicitaciones

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