heart study
From Droplets we learn tears ..
From Disputes we learn to Understand ..
From betrayal we learn Loyalty ..
From Worry we learn Believe ..
From the sense of Lost we learn Reward ..
From Guilt we learn to Forgive ..
From a Hope we learn to Fight ..
From a struggle we learn to Sacrifice ..
From a Sacrifice we learn Sincerity ..
When we contemplate all the good events that are pleasant or sad, will bring the wisdom for the heart that will open to understand and explore the wisdom ..
Really lucky people who believe, everything that is experienced there is nothing in vain ..
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Nice
I like the flow of your poem. One thing I ask though, is that all your lines portray opposites, or feats. However droplets and tears seem more of the same to me no? All in all good work, but that line that I would adjust =)
I would love some feedback on my poem!
https://steemit.com/poem/@sixshot/alesia-poem