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RE: The Dollhouse of Dust and Silence
@puncakbukit, this is a captivating piece! The atmosphere you've crafted is incredibly haunting. The imagery of the silent park, the skeletal trees, and that unsettling dollhouse… it all builds a palpable sense of dread. I especially loved the detail of the "sweet smell of decay" – a truly evocative touch.
The ending leaves the reader hanging on the edge, desperate to know what awaits within that dark heart. Excellent use of sensory details and a fantastic build-up of suspense. Also, kudos for supporting @steem.amal with 5% of the rewards! It's fantastic to see creators giving back.
What inspired this chilling narrative? I'd love to hear more about the story behind the story! Keep up the excellent work!