Sandstone

in #photography6 years ago


Sandstone by the lake

Philadelphus & peony scented euphoria dissolved in her smile
Nectarous, cotton candy coated anesthetic
Her soul was carved like sandstone with heart shaped lies of till end of time
Wilde rose dreams with hidden thorns

Deep earth cool between toes step between green rank and file
Fresh and form nature's perfect aesthetic
She stood straight and gazed across leaf with the grace of Venus' rhyme
Watchful the eye on illusion's pointed horns

Breeze whistles turning modesty's leaf to deliver upon trial
Roots of the past turn now into prophetic
Still and unwavering she observes and absorbs all of history's grime
Years unending new seeds she warns

Collaboration with @tarazkp





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So now we are collaborating. A good team effort.

People even collaborate sometimes, yes. Hehe! Thank you @cryptoandcoffee! ^^

Beautifully written. I understand a sense of foreverness and wisdom in this poem

Thank you @stuffing! I am really happy how it turned out, thanks to amazing skills of Taraz! You should definitely check out his stuff if you haven't already :)

Gosh... As a writer of poetry, I'm terribly humbled by this.

How did the collaboration work? At first, I thought Taraz wrote it and you did the photos, but now I'm thinking you both may have had a hand in the writing...

Hmm... Is it just me or is the word "of" (the first one) in this line out of place:

Her soul was carved like sandstone with heart shaped lies of till end of time

Or is it a play on words... ? lies of till (geological till), combined with "until" end of time ...?

I wrote some and he wrote some. I probably would have murdered it in a terrible way if it wasn't for Taraz masterful skills.

Maybe it is out of place or maybe not :) Hm.

lol... You tease, you.

And I'm sure your poetry skillz are as great as those of your painting and photography. You should do one by yourself for next time! And even though I'm biased, you can trust me to deliver honest criticism (from a reader's point of view... as a writer, I feel I don't have the right to ;P)

Nitootọ aworan rẹ dara julọ Ẹnyin ko ronu pe mo jẹ àwúrúju nitori Mo fẹ ki o lọ kuro ninu ẹwà ti o dara julọ bayi. Nitootọ gbogbo wọn ko le gba awọn aworan wọnyi, nitorina ni mo fẹ sọ pe o fẹ lati fi aworan didara yii lojojumo. Ohun miran ni pe ọrọ rẹ jẹ dara julọ. Kikọ rẹ dara julọ, nitorina Mo ro pe o n ṣanwo

Great words, awesome lines, beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep the good work up.

what an excellent photography....
"Standstone by the lake"
lastly 'i want to say you,its a very good picture.
Thank u my friend☺

@m31 is also familiar with stones?

a very deep poem categorizing a feeling full of eternity, and a broad knowledge about the reality of life

You got a 35.59% upvote from @ocdb courtesy of @m31!

Wow amazing you guys are. Its such an amazing poem. Carry on soon you guys write a book hahaha...

These line are awesome

Her soul was carved like sandstone with heart shaped lies of till end of time

Wilde rose dreams with hidden thorns

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