I like the depth of contrast and clarity of the images. The only thing I'd say is that the last one doesn't appear to be a natural positioning. She looks like she's specifically posing as opposed to the more natural positions in the other photographs. That one's my least favorite, but I still think it's a good picture.
Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate criticism, and I think you're absolutely right. I wasn't sure about even including that one and now I wish I hadn't, lol. Now that I think about it more, in the context of the whole series, it stands out like a sore thumb.
I don't think it's so much skipping it completely, but I think it should have been in the middle so it isn't the last one that's seen. The last picture tends to be the one that leaves the impression longest, if you ask me. It's not a poor photo at all, though.
I'm glad you did include it! For me, its my favourite (along with the parking-lot). Even though it appears a lot more staged, I like the set-up - it invites the viewer to ask questions. What is Tessa doing at the house? Is it her's, or someone else's? Is she inviting someone in, or saying goodbye?
The only thing I would change would be to have the door slightly ajar - this would give the shot a more seductive element.
Great mood, pretty model. ;)