Truth's hill

in #philosophy7 years ago (edited)

{Truth's Hill}

~original poetry~


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I.


When, at last, down we sit
To approach the daunt of tasks
Hopeless we, or valiant,
Uncorked our full creation's casks?

Into the gaunt of burdenous work,
Or haunting child's play,
Within the lack of joy do lurk,
Or 'xude most brilliant ray?

The truth between, elusive mean
Whose calls echo afar,
In life do we, most fitfully,
A-strain our ears unto dark star.


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II.


The weave of words is smooth and sweet
For those who their etudes do meet
With studious mind in reverent silence
On confusion crying "Fie!" from hence

"It makes no sense!" forswore, instead:
"All things have truth" becomes affirmed.
The former fool that closed their head,
Sees fractals of some wholeness germed

Within the consciousness, infected,
By revolution, new reflected.
Old in essence, novel still:
By steep degrees we climb Truth's hill.


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Written by
@d-pend
12/12/17


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I like your poem it transfers person in other world gives the feeling that you are there. Sensing what you are feeling. It widens our perspective loking on things. Poem is the language of our soul. Its so beautful to read how wonderfull is your soul throu your poettry. Thanks

I approve :)

The hill is far in thoughts of closed dolls. We run water into the flow of words, infected fields look for new air in the lungs of life.
The essence of the ship is the direction - we choose in this crazy world of imagination, paradigm and false idols. Amazing and unique poetry from - One and only @d-pend

We ruminate in myriad falsities,
Exhume the pure facts from the disrespected past.
We reminisce over idealistic lovescapes
Consume the white lies to make fantasy last.

Thank you as always @dobartim!

A real master of magic rhetoric, Thank You my friend like always @d-pend

Certainly the way you weave your words is astonishing really makes a whole lot of creativity and sweetness.
This time I can say the stanzas style changed a bit here

Quite impressive. Good poetry. keep it up boss.

great topic!
but not anyone can climb this hill ever.. and not anyone wants..

Applauds! This is magnificent <3

:-D
Thanks for the wonderful praise @wandrnrose7 :)

Much deserved, my friend.

Hell yeah!
That last verse.

"Within the consciousness, infected,
By revolution, new reflected.
Old in essence, novel still:
By steep degrees we climb Truth's hill."

Glad you dug it man!!

Beautiful poem.and hills.pics

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