Open Mic Week 32 : Wayward (Voices in my head) by Trillex
VERSE 1
Uh
I swear I loved you when I first met you
My mama said No, so I don't dare do
otherwise coz the consequences 'surely scare you
Things all these mamas say
Yeah
My mama said No, but I broke that rule
Boy you've been acting tough hope you find the truth
Now, Remember your creator In the days of thy Youth
Mend your ways before the chapter 12, I'm talking verse 2
Bruh, how can I neglect what I chased for years
Since I was a younging I've been chasing girls
Yeah I Finally found one my nigga, so I thought
'Fo my momma told me, Son you just found a nought
Mahn, Almost got involved with my other cuz
Ofcourse we knew that are fam but Hey whats what
Prolly devil on me shoulder, telling me to bust
Damn, thank God I didn't listen to the voice
Voices telling me, Son you can do better
Momma telling me Boy hope you know better
My momma said No, but I broke that Rule
My sister warned me and I shunned her too
Building up an empire, a sand castle
Then water washed away, the things I built
This is more like a warm-up (lol) original song by ; @trillex
I would love to have you involved in this new project im doing here on steemit.
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oh YASSS!
Good to see you back. Nice work, good luck this week.
🙌Major Man! Thanks @brimax
Your welcome my good man👍
Cool entry bro, keep writing, not exactly a 100% sure what this song is about, you can tell me, but enjoyed the mysteriousness of it nonetheless. glad to see you performing again. Upvoted
Hahhhah. The theme is based on voices in my head(good and bad)...from the start I was wayward, falling in love with vices then in between listened to the right voice...but finally made some bad choices thay brought about chaotic results (Building up an empire, a sand castle
Then water washed away, the things I built). I appreciate you taking your time to analyse the short performance. Always great to hear your feedbacks. Thanks mahn @verbal-d 💪💪💪
You're very welcome bro, I liked the lyrics, and I love to analyse performances, they can be very motivational and inspiring. I just submitted my entry, hope you enjoy it bro.