Open Mic Week 32 - Original Song "What have we become" by Shavon Bonnie Legion
Open Mic Week 32 Entry
Shavon Bonnie Legion - Original Acoustic WIP song "What Have We Become"
Here is the newest song I have been working on called "What Have We Become"
Its in early stages, and I hope to share a very dynamic final production when finalized in the future.
I am always eager and excited when joining openmic, I am a huge fan of the open mic community.
I hope you enjoy much thanks for listening
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So great to see you again my dear friend, that intro is priceless and so funny, I've also had many moments of the same forgetfulness. Sometimes we have so many songs, titles are just a blur and I hope the right one is spoken out into the atmosphere before I accidentally perform the wrong song, which has happened, but I made it work lol
Your angelic voice is billowing like a gentle breeze amongst the wavering flowered branches of a beautiful forest. You can pretty much write about anything and deliver it with a silky spun web of clinging lyrics that bring the mind into a deep silence of contemplation and wonderment.
Your guitar playing is a given gift shared with us all. Songwriting is a crafted talented which you wield to slash through all blockades attempting to impede upon your uniquely fiery and impacting voice/craft. Great entry as always, big up vote, especially through my words of praise
ohh goodness you never cease to fail me my friend, I had to actually read this outloud to my husband, not only is it incredibly kind and deep, as you always are, but I found it humorous as I read it back in an ambient theatrical voice that had us both just cracking up big time. Verbal - D you are fantastic in every way
Lol I'm very glad you enjoyed my praise of you, your music makes it quite easy to do so. Tell your husband hello, you guys make some powerful music together, what a duo!
Wow , that is just awesome .... the lyrics , your singing , the style of guitar playing and the chords you chose ... i mean ... it just all fits together perfectly ... it's kinda hard to know what to say ... it's just perfect ... Excellent work , and awesome performance ... it really came through that you were feeling the song as you were playing it.
huge thanks my friend that means alot thats for listening. I am really enjoying the open mic on steemit, its a nice way to get out a new tune working around in the head. much love
Excellent! Good job and great lyrics!
thanks @ik666 im a huge fan so means alot from you big ups.
ahahaha you forgot! love it Shavon :)
huge love to you much thanks:) yeah i went a little air headed there for a second.. its quite late here i def need some sleep lol
you better rest then..be well!
Ah this has quite a euphoria to it. Really really nice lyrics! Enjoyed the imagery and overall sssssstory ;)
@jaybird huge thanks my friend your a fav
Lyrically very relevant and current. Great melody and well sung. Really enjoyed this one!
thanks so much my friend im glad you diggin this one and also find it currently relevant, was aiming for that
Great job!
Great lyrics. I'm going to start calling you Goosebumps because every time I hear you sing I get goosebumps.
Hey, where did you get that Steemit video clip that bookends your videos? That's cool. I want one.
someone posted it in my comments awhile back and said to use it I need to go dig up who that was lol
huge thanks for the compliment my friend! big love
Love hearing you sing as always. Steem is up to $1. Wow, something to sing about.
Good post!
thank you
Just beautiful. You and the acoustic alone is where you shine the most. You were meant to go on stage by yourself. Just an awesome song, and the voice is killer. BIG TIME UPVOTE.
massive thanks. I always feel most comfortable with the guitar, I need to play more. These open mics encourage my playing. Im on this life journey with music and it goes in so many phases, I have found my stride with online work, dabbled in performance and I know its where I belong, but it hasnt found me yet, but its coming i see it. Me and that guitar will find our stage soon lol! maybe then you come join me and we duet it out live
Keep up the good work. A duet sounds good. Maybe I will figure out this Brazilian music soon! Who knows, if I find a guitar, things could get crazy down there haha!
omg you are talking poetry in my ears, doing original music with brazilians in brazil and adding that flavor, meeting the people and absorbing that life...ahhhhh i am in envy. I hope steem blows past bitcoin and makes us all millionaires and im all over this planet me and my mister to breathe in the world with music. May you find a guitar in brazil, and bring me a little taste of that inspiration back.
I shall try to get it done! I'm bringing my laptop so will keep in touch with the steem community....now I need to actually pack for a three-week trip haha
Don't take this the wrong way granted our past collaborations ;) but I LOVE you as an acoustic artist. It really suits you.
absolutely don't take that the wrong way, Its where I started in this industry and I just sorda go all over doing everything genre wise, but yes acoustic sits in my soul the real songs come out. I end up staying away from it to long and it starts to ooze out and i need to just pick up the guitar.
That's awesome - I'm so used to hearing you over Dub Cadence stuff ;). Keep at it, sounding phenomenal.