Steemit Open Mic Week 104 Original Song By Ryan Vega "This Monotonous Life"

in openmic •  10 months ago 


Hey everyone this is an original I wrote, the first one I wrote actually, a long time ago haha. I'll name it right now "This Monotonous Life". Anyway, I promised myself last week to everyone I would do an original so here it is, it's not my best but I figured it was well suited for it.
Sorry i'm so frickin awkward in this idk what I was thinking haha. Please feel free to let me know what you think below and give me any feed back, I need it, this is all still so alien to me and I want to give it my all!
Also i'd like to thank the people who make this possible, I now look very much forward to posting in this competition every week and can't wait to see what the future holds. So with that I hope you enjoy. All the best.

Lyrics:
Just a lost boy who's broken and tossed to the side by a world so unforgiving as it stabs him in the eyes
he's never good enough for anyone, not even himself, so he sits there and writes another song about this hell
as he stares in the mirror and his eyes scream help, help, help
cuz he's falling to fast to catch himself
no one will answer
nobody cares
his minds out on the table in need of repairs
Yet everyday he wakes up and puts on his clothing
as he walks out the door every morning
still mourning the version of his story untold and unchanging
he's tired of the same thing everyday ~
Take him away~~

Take 10, there he goes daydreaming again
about
all the things that he could have been
how
did he end up here he had so many dreams he was so sure he would leave
This washed up town with nothing to offer but a list of fake friends who don't even bother
and don't get him started on the man he calls his father
maybe they'd all notice if he tried a little harder
yet everyday he
wakes up and puts on his clothing as he walks out the door every morning
still mourning the version of his story untold and unchanging he's tired of the same thing everyday

SORRY I DIDN'T SAY WEEK 104 IN THE BEGINNING I REALIZED AFTER UPLOADING D;

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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!
AWESOME lyrics, amazing voice...overall an AMAZING MUSICAN!
MORE ORIGINALS PLEASE

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sorry i must have over looked that one, won't happen again ty!

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