Steemit Open Mic Week 100 - El Balcón - Original Song.

in openmic •  3 months ago

Hello Steemit!

It's been a while since I entered Open Mic , I wasn't able to record and also went over to record my album so I was focusing on that and not really writing new material.. this song just came in as a surprise as I put it together in about 4 hours , from nothing to this little performance I am sharing here.

I have this belief that music already exists and we just somehow connect to a particular moment , like taking a photograph of the sound. Sometimes you capture these moments quickly , sometimes they take a lot of time.

After fighting with Dtube for a couple uploads I gave up.. so.. here it is on plain old Youtube :P

Hope you like it!

El Balcón
(P.Mena)

Calló su voz
Cayó su sol
Perdió color
en el silencio

Su corazón
se marchitó
En el calor
de su miedo

Su balcón
se cerró
la escondió
en su pena

Y Aun
Se duerme sola
La luz
cuenta sus horas
Aun
despierta sola
La lluvia en enero
se pasa mas lento
''ya pasará''

Here is a translation:

The Balcony
(P.Mena)

Her voice stopped
Her sun fell
She lost her color
in the silence

Her heart
withered down
In the heat
of her fears

Her balcony
has closed
it hid her
in her grief

And Still
She sleeps alone
The light
counts her hours
And still
She wakes up alone
Rain in January
goes away slower
''this too shall pass''

Thanks for Listening!

Pechiche Mena

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Me encanta, me encantan las armonías weeeeee

toda la suerte del mundo
Pechi winner this week, por favor

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Oh boy.. this looks yummy

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<3 Gracias Pris ! Sino.. me contento con los pancakes y tu comment :D !

Beautiful as always Pechi <3 <3 <3

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Thank you so much Lilly Lillers :) <3<3

que fino esta tu tema ^_^

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muchas gracias @andreini :) que lindo que te haya gustado!

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adreini jeje, no se porque se equivocan :C

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mmm .. i like pancakes..

Wow, you can put something together in a few hours that would take me weeks, if I could even do it at all. Love it

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Thank you @steevc :) ! It's just a matter of practice doing these type of quick pre-productions. I have to deliver three of these this week hahaha.. so at some point it just becomes somehow mechanic :) ! Thanks for stopping by for a listen!

tremendo tema mi pana, muy buena melodia, te felicito este post es digno de un reesteem. Es una canción para descargarla y tenerla en el carro y escucharla siempre.

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Muchas gracias querido @beto14 ! espero poder grabarla en una mejor version :) . Un gran abrazo!

beautiful as ever pechi x happy 100 bro

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My friend! haven't seen you since forever! Thanks for stopping by ! what are you up to lately?!!

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if I told you that I would have to melt you down and turn you in to components to add on to my giant space station,,,,......life is a crazy busy wierd machine and I am stuck right in to its manufacture, committed like a criminal, but SOON, the world will be mine. How are you?

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Oh.. seems that you have been busy... well.. here we have been more normal.. for example we have

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damn. they look REALLY good right now

wow.... I love your music and voice!!!
Can you make it English version, too?
I really love it!! :)

start following now. :)

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Thank you so much ! translating a song is a challenge but I will try :D ! thanks for your comment!

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Yeah, I know translating a song is a real challenge. Haha
But I asked you because I really love your songs :)
Thanks for your comment back!! :)

Eres lo máximo. Amo tus canciones, la letra, tu voz, el conjunto de todo. No sabía ni que comentario poner mas que agradecerte por compartir esto tan hermoso.

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ooooohhhh <3<3<3 Muchas gracias @gabyoraa por tus lindas palabras :) . Me hace muy feliz que te haya gustado esta canción , me vino a visitar hoy :) y decidí compartirla. Muchas gracias por escuchar y dejar tan lindo mensaje. Significa mucho para mi :) .... Un gran abrazo !

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those are definitely some king pancakes!

LOVED IT PECH. Beautiful chorus especially.

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Thank you ! :D I'm glad you like the works of Popchiche Mena ... LOL ! Cheers!

¡¡¡Por dios!!! ¡Qué clase de genialidad! Me encantó demasiado la armonía y todo lo que nos traes en este performance querido Pechi, de verdad que clase de músico eres. Gracias por darle más valor a esta hermosa plataforma con este contenido magnífico, te admiro muchísimo, mucho amor y respeto para ti.

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Gracias querido hermano @ilazramusic por el comentario :) . Lo mismo digo de ti , mi mas sincero respeto y admiración :) . También me pone contento ver que estes compartiendo tu arte en esta plataforma y trayendo buena vibra a quien te rodea. Se que se van a ver con @wilins y @josecabrerav , mándales un gran abrazo de mi parte y me gustaría estar ahi compartiendo un café y una charla con uds :).

Y solo para no perder la costumbre:

Flags @ilazramusic

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Jajaja claro que si hermano, dalo por hecho.

Wow, brother - you took a great musical snapshot here, man...
I love this song and arrangement...
NICE, Pechiche!

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Thank you very much brother :) ! It happened and POOF! .. I might consider including it in the album now :D.. It might make it's way in through the backdoor :) !

Hermosa melodía, hermosa letra excelente interpretación!
Es un espectáculo de canción, pues!! ja ja!
Éxitos!!

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jaja <3 muchas gracias @esthersanchez! por las palabras ! me alegro mucho que te haya gustado :) ! Creo q voy a considerar grabarla :D ! Un gran abrazo!

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Es un exitazo ! Adelante!!

Very nice, sometimes the fresh is the best! I missed it on the feed, just saw it now. Too late to upvote, but it's upvoted in my heart.

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Heart upvotes are 100 times more valuable my friend :) ! thank you so much !

Muuuy buena. Terminé cantándola. Brutal, pechiche. Qué bello. Saludos.

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Hola @siomarasalmeron :D ! muchisimas gracias ! Que lindo que te haya gustado ! ya voy a ver como hago para grabarla en serio :) ! Un gran abrazo!

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Se escucha muy bien. Saludos.

Beautiful music @pechichemena! Congrats and keep jamming my friend.

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Thank you so much Luz ! It's always a pleasure to share some music here :D ! I'm so happy this song got the support it did ! PUMPED now :D ! yay!!

Really nice song. It has a calming vibe to it.