Quite cool and creative thematic interpretation, mate!

However, since week #60's contest closed out on Friday, if I'm not mistaken, this dual entry would be for Songwriters Week-#1 & Open-Mic #61, which starts officially on Sunday.

So remember to drop this link on the week #61 comment section after it is announced on Sunday. I'm sure that all will be well - especially since it's still a bit confusing being the 1st week of the songwriters contest and all.