Steemit Openmic Week 57-Original Song-Make Some Love
Hi Steemit people ! Another love song for you. This more of a song for the Earth, a song for the Goddess, a song for Woman. Peace
There's a question
To the answer
We have given
Up to God
She has spoken
And the message
Will be carried
Down to us
Hear the calling
Of the other
What will make us
Hear the sound
Find the healer
With the potion
Drink it down
I think I want to make some love
In this world
Can we make just a little bit of love
In this world
I think I want to make some love
With you girl
There's a mother
She is crying
For her children
Have no love
They will wound her
With their hunger
There is nothing
To fill them up
Oh Father
Shine upon us
Heal the sorrow
That we are
And know that
I care
Even if
They do not
repeat chorus
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STOPNice!... Awesome vocals and guitar work "one-true"... beautiful melodies, "brother!"
amazing! that guitar sounds great , and really liked the song ! cheers!
Thank you
wow what a nice voice you have sir,. yeah make some love in this world.. i have my entry to sir you check it on my page..
Thanks
Killer chord progression man! Thumbs up!
Thanks I love those open chords!
Very beautiful! The lyrics are deeply great!
As always, beautiful! <3
One insignificant thing: to the right and top of your frame did you notice the perfect alignment of the calendar and windows to the picture frame? Did that just happen or it took some effort? Whatever, I will give it to you: brilliant composition, from a photography pov. Hahahaha
Thanks for listening to it glad you like it. Be well my friend
Oh! I guess you didn't read the second part of my comment. I added those as an EDIT :-)
That's funny yes I have been using an ipad and when I looked at the screen before recording I adjusted the angle to make the window line up...good catch !
:-) Brilliant! You are tidy all-round.
OK, you did it again and gave me goosebumps. Great lyrics and the guitar sounds great.
Hey thanks man. It's funny that people like the guitar sound because I am desperate for a new (old and broken in) guitar. This one needs a full fret job and is sounding very very bright and tinny; thus as you may have noticed in the videos I have a cloth stuffed into the body which seems to help mellow the sound! Anyway thanks for the compliments. Since most of these songs have barely been heard by anyone it is nice to know that some people enjoy them. peace to you
beautiful!! loved the way you played guitar and also great vocal!!
That was fast! I just posted it a few minutes ago but happened to still be at the computer...thanks a lot man I appreciate the positivity!