Steemit Openmic Songwriters Challenge-Week6-Original Song-Special Delivery
This week's challenge lived up to its name for me...this theme was tough and I don't feel finished. Also I had a series of injuries to my hand and the frigid temps killed my voice for some reason.
But the Songwriters Challenge waits for no one!
Wish I had more time for this one but here you go...
Thanks for listening
Calling to you
My heart in my hand
A little confused
Didn't understand
What I had to do
Or how to make it through
The pain
Through the pain
You delivered me
A special delivery
Deliver me
You can deliver me
Home
I was going to go
Give it all away
When you came and showed
That I need to stay
As long as I have you then
There is reason to
Remain
To remain
Delivery me
A special delivery
Deliver me
You can deliver me
Home
Peace
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Hey man, my hermit-in-kind… no excuses, brother… but I suspect it’s just your way of being humble… I loved this! More than anything else, the lyrics struck a chord… that in concert with your signature style is all I needed in order to embrace this with all of my heart. Nice, brother – very nice!
Thanks bro, yeah I didn't feel "closure" with this one...felt like the chorus could be better. But just like the previous weeks, once it is posted I try to move on. Peace man I hope all is well with you!
Thanks, brother! Yeah, man - some tracks taste sweeter than others... however, you should be extremely proud that none you produce are ever sour. :-)
Oh man I hate when that shit happens, especially the vocal crap. Had one of those a few entries back.
Feel better brotha.
And all in all still came out pretty good i think. It's just almost impossible to say"special Delivery" and be somewhat serious ;)
YEEEY!! I love the Martin sound :)
You look like a character form Twin Peaks (in a good way :D hahah). Beautiful song btw :)
As long as I don't look "dead...wrapped in plastic..." lol
Peace and thanks