Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week 7 - lo que es real no siempre se puede ver (Original music)
Hello to the entire Steemit community, this is my first song, I hope you like it.
Invisible como el viento, que en mis mejillas siento
La brisa así nos trae, un algo que puede ser,
Lo que es real no siempre lo puedes ver.
Creer, tu puedes creer, tus sueños veras hacer realidad
Creer, con tu corazón veras, tu canción vivirás.
Bajo tierra ocultar, a la hora correcto tienes que llegar,
Invisible como el viento, en un lugar desierto,
La brisa así nos trae, un algo que puede ser,
Lo que es real no siempre lo puedes ver.
Creer, tu puedes creer, tus sueños veras hacer realidad
Creer, con tu corazón veras, tu canción vivirás
Under ground hide, in the right place you have to search,
Invisible like the wind, which in my cheeks I feel
The breeze brings us, something that can be,
What is real can not always be seen.
Believe, you can believe, your dreams will come true
Believe, with your heart you will see, your song will live.
Under the ground hide, at the right time you have to arrive,
Invisible like the wind, in a desert place,
The breeze brings us, something that can be,
What is real can not always be seen.
Believe, you can believe, your dreams will come true
Believe, with your heart you will see, your song will live.
Someone get this girl an instrument! You have a lovely voice :)
our hearts are invisible like the wind
very true and thank you
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I love your lyrics! "What is real cannot always be seen". The words to the first verse are resonant and deep and worth repeating in the second. Beautiful. I also really like the way the last line of the verses rhymes with the first word of the choruses, both signaling a change in the music and drawing the listener along in a seamless transition. Nicely done :)
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thank you for your encouraging words