STEEMIT OPEN MIC WEEK 58 (Original Composition) / Mogati ~ Calor ("warmth")

in openmic •  11 days ago

Hello Steemit!

@gokulramdas and I are so excited to share our original "Calor" with all of you for the Open Mic Week 58 :) This song is very special to us, because it is what brought us together as a duo a few years ago. Since then, we decided to write together as Mogati, combining sounds from both our cultures, Chile and India.
We recorded this a few days ago in our house and have been working on the edit of the video, in the process we realized that I said week 57 instead of 58 :( We weren't sure if we should post it because of that but we already did all the work so here it goes anyways!! We hope you enjoy it as much as we did playing!!

LYRICS:

Calor

Fui a encontrar con quién sentarme a mirar,
el mar está tranquilo, está pa volar
Pa volar, pa volar

Muralla el tiempo y sus manos largas,
yo voy con el viento y su tibia calma
Muralla el tiempo y sus manos largas,
yo voy con el viento y su tibia calma

Fueron las palabras que aún tengo en el pa-
Ladrar gritos, montañas de ansiedad.
Si pudiera encontrar el mar...
Pa volar, pa volar

Muralla el tiempo y sus manos largas,
yo voy con el viento y su tibia calma
Muralla el tiempo y sus manos largas,
yo voy con el viento y su tibia calma

Suave el calor en la espalda cuando no te guardas ná.
No hay nada mas que hacer que aceptar,
todos los días que vendrán...

English Translation:

Warmth

I went to find with whom to sit and look around
The sea is calm, it's perfect to fly
To fly, to fly

Time is a wall with long hands
I’m going with the breeze and its warm calm
Time is a wall with long hands
I’m going with the breeze and its warm calm

It was the words that I still have on my palate
Barking, shouting, mountains of anxiety
If I could find the sea…
To fly, to fly

Time is a wall with long hands
I’m going with the breeze and its warm calm
Time is a wall with long hands
I’m going with the breeze and its warm calm

Warmth in my back when I don’t keep anything inside
There is nothing else to do but to accept the days to come...

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La armonia que hace el chico de vez en cuando es exquisita me encanta <3

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Great professional entry!! But you said "Openmic 57" while you posted under 58:) Ah...you told me why:) So doesn't matter, still great!

Saludos, que hermoso tema, me gustaría contar con su aprobación para compartirlo en mi podcast. Un abrazo, me ha encantado.

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Hola! Gracias! Cuentas con nuestra aprobación :) saludos!

really struck by your effortless sense of phrasing over the shifting meter .Any tips for how to learn these kinds of rhythmic patterns?! So beautiful thank you.

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hey! thank you :) and well...is a tough question haha. I guess playing and experimenting with friends helps me. Of course, a lot of repetition is important to get used to the way these patterns feel.

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its really awesome and inspiring !! thank you ... i will get back to practising now :)

Oh wow, this was awesome! Wicked syncopation between the guitar and drum and beautiful vocals to top it off.

Top notch entry. Gave me great vibes! Songwriting was on point, even though I didn't understand the lyrics...the sentiment came through.

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hey! thank you so much! we really like working on the details :)...I tried my best to write a translation if you're curious about the meaning!

Wow. You both just totally blew me away. Just an absolutely magical connection between you two, the rhythms are so intricate and playful, and warm guitar playing, and gorgeous singing. It is a crying shame you said the wrong week number because I think this is a winning entry otherwise. I am instantly a huge fan!!! So happy to follow you and can't wait to hear more amazing music! Love - Carl

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Hey! Thanks for the sweet comment and yeah...disqualified probably :( but its okay.. we were experimenting with production, it was a great learning experience :) I'll say it right next time :P

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OMG why disqualified!?!?!

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I said 57 :P

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Fuck ... did you try and bring it to their notice? You should if you didn’t I’m sure they can make a consideration if approached.

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Impresionantes sentimientos recorren el cuerpo al escucharlos, saludos :)

You both performed this entry with a powerful force, it was such a treat!
You have made my top 5 list, please check it out here
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-58-original-blog

Hermoso tema. Un bello canto de esperanza. ¡Bravo!

Just what I needed to hear.
I'm always on the look out for new music.
This just expanded my musical horizon.
Thank you. Will follow you for more amazing stuff like this. :)

That was an amazing musical journey. You guys sound so good. Hope to hear more from you.

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Hey @luzcypher! Thanks :) it was fun playing around with audio/video gear!

WOW, beautiful performance. I listened it with great pleasure.

Okay, now that's some serious duet. Now you guys are calling me out.
Wait for mine.

esto es un pequenio tesoro musical, les deseo muchos exitos... tengo la seguridad que ustedes van a disfrutar mucho de Steemit, fuerte abrazo a los dos talentosos artistas.

Yay! I am so glad you two got the upvote you deserved. That song was moving. :)

upvote y resteem. Linda melodía, linda letra, la segunda voz perfecta. los cambios de métrica me encantaron. como se llama el tamborsito que toca el chico?

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Hola! Gracias :) me encanta jugar con las métricas :P y @gokulramdas está tocando la Kanjira, un instrumento típico del sur de la India. Saludos!!

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me gustan los armónicos entre tonos altos y bajos que suelta el Kanjira.. Bendiciones y éxitos!!

wow, this is the best I have seen in a long time :) thank youu

I simply love your articles, what great content and quality of posting you offer the community here on Steemit and abroad.

Thanks a lot :)

What a beautiful voice, nice melody

Beautiful! <3

Ragan, talan y bhavan sobretodo, me encanto, una lagrima quizo salir, pude evitarlo, los felicito... the
Kanjira player fantastic... me encanto tu voz... te seguire por siempre. gracias.

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Hola! Gracias...vamos a estar subiendo más canciones pronto! Saludos!

sweet

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Hi! Thank you, I read about the project, we would love to participate :)

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Cool! I'm nominating you right now. Personally, I greatly admire your music here. Such a joy seeing and hearing your creative spirit. You're off to an awesome start on Steemit, so I hope you'll keep up the good work.

waoooo .. i like it

I like this musica mucho. ustedes have talento es una mixture very interesante de culturas viva Chile long live India. I love both paises.

good lyrics comrade

Excelente interpretación, Saludos y muchos éxitos




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Oh my god I cant stop playing this song over and over I do not understand a single word in your original lyric but the melody of your song melt and dissolved into my brain.. magnificent!

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Just beautiful. Can imagine this on a movie soundtrack whilst the camera glides over the water from above.

wow. stunning performance.
lovely voice and nice quality !
please steem on ! following

Wow… You two just "warmed" and enriched my soul! Chilly for me – India for you (ha!) – it’s all so, so good! This brought complete joy to my heart! Thank you…

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Glad you enjoyed it :)

very nice....

Me gusto muchisimo, los felicito¡

Beautiful!

Musica bonita. Amo la canción (I hope this is translated correctly!)

full of emotions ...... and that was pro! great job you guys did, loved it!!

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Hi! Thanks David! Just listened to your original song for the openmic, really cool!

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Thank you so much @matisotoaguilar :)

Thats awesome man, keep it up with your original work. Talent rocks

This was amazing. Great video.

you are soooooooooo good!! amazing

very pretty music to listen to particularly in the language you chose. Comforting with the guitar. Thanks for sharing.

Trance like music.. very nice!

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hey! Thank you :)