Steemit Open Mic Songwriter's Challenge Week 8 "Until We Meet Again"

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Hello Steemians

I'm almost sad to see this contest over. I enjoy writing songs all the time, so I really look forward to more of these. What as theme to end the contest on?


Until We Meet Again

lyrics

No span of space and time

My mind would not wish to travel and find

Some peace of mind and spirit

You were my desitiny

Stolen like fools

Lost without trace

Oh my heart aches

I'd fall to find you


Until we meet again

I feel you all around

My heart will never find

Solace without you in this world

I sought yet could never find

This magic that you bought me

Angel of paradise

It's in death you will find me


And as your body was lowered in the ground

That shining spirit was somewhere around

Comforting me in hours of need

I know you are there and one day I will be


Hope you all enjoyed!

Do me a favor guys and go give some love to my old friend, former and now current lead guitarist for the newly reformed Incarceri 9 with yours truly. Welcome @jordanowen42 to Steemit. Here's his intro post!

https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@jordanowen42/jordanowen42-joins-steemit-guitarist-writer-critic-discussions-of-the-arts-entertainment-and-culture


Also,  Download The  Steemit Artist Music Compilation (S.A.M.C.) Volume 3  from @soundlegion

https://steemit.com/music/@soundlegion/steemit-artist-music-compilation-volume-3-post-payout-spotlight-artists-final-official-volume-3-post-support-artists-on-steemit


Also!

To any musician out there, go and audition to play at the new Steemit based music venue The Horns Up Saloon!

https://steemit.com/hornsupsaloon/@lk666/first-audition-post-for-the-horns-up-saloon-post-your-auditions-in-the-comment-section

https://steemit.com/hornsupsaloon/@lk666/primer-puesto-de-audicion-para-the-horns-up-saloon-publique-sus-audiciones-en-la-seccion-de-comentarios


A big thank you and much love to the contest organizers

@luzcypher @meno and the judges @krystle @passion-ground and @verbal-d


As always PEACE, LOVE, AND HORNS UP!

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Here you go sir., a man with a metallic genre that keeps my blood alive over and over. Not just a singer but a poetic writing skills are on your blood already. My salute to you as always sir.

Thank you much bradda!
I salute you as well and your singing and playing skills. You've a great range my friend.

Man I love the use of that looper to put a solo in there! Perfect example of not overdoing it. Good vocal on this one as well. I think this is my favorite one of yours from this challenge.
Much respect
Peace

Thank you very much @onetruebrother! This is my favorite of mine from this contest as well. It kinda sewed it all up nicely
Peace to you as well man :)

Really liked the deep sensation your song gives, it's a mix of sorrow and darkness, but there's a little bit of hope that surrounds it, at least for me.
Congratulations !

Thank you :)
It's that hope that even in nothingness that we will all integrate one day.

I sought yet could never find
This magic that you bought me
Angel of paradise
It's in death you will find me

Damn I thought you had written about Marcia and me. I can so relate to your lyrics...your pain...your message. You know my story brother. No religion is ever going to take the pain away until you and I are in our loved ones arms again. I get it. Damn I miss her. Thanks SO much for the moment. Probably your best song. Thanks thanks thanks.

Thank you my friend. I saw the theme and instantly knew what I had to write. Plus I was hit with a random bout of depression yesterday morning and she appeared in my dreams for the first time in a while. I knew why, she knew I needed to see her. A lot of folks will never understand, I hope.

Your lyrics are awesome. I enjoyed great, hope you will continue this!

Thank you much :)
I'm constantly writing, recording, etc. and will do so as long as I'm able :)

You are most welcome ! Go ahead dear.

Awesome man. You got some good writing skills and got through all 8 songs. Impressive.

Thank you so much @luzcypher :)

Great as always!! this dream is short and sure we leave and I hope we see our lost in the after world...
\m/

Thank you @davidfar !
I'm about to go lay down vokills for your song man ;)

I got them bro!! great job!! will send you the mastered track soon :))

The master track is rockin. It's sounding very Satyriconish, except for my clean vocals
\m/

great job

Thank you!

Well done! And congrats on doing every week of the contest. I've really enjoyed listening to your songs. This was a good one, but I'll bet they'll all be good this week ;)

Thanks man, I think a lot of people did very well in this contest. Things like this can only serve to make us better writers :)

Nice Lyricks

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