OPEN MIC SONG WRITERS CHALLENGE WEEK 7 - by @klynic original song

in #openmic8 years ago (edited)

Hi guys, I am a songwriter who has never been more challenged to be spontaneous in cooking songs till I met the open mic team. Now they have a song writers challenge everyweek where they get to give you a topic and you write a song on it.

If you are a song writer then you need to hope in as there is only one more week left.

why do i bother?

Okay, apart from the fact that this sharpens my songwriting skills, it is good publicity for my music, plus I get to win a brand new guitar if my song tops the chart.

BIG HIGH FIVE TO @meno for being awesome.

So I know I am prolly entering late, (sobs) but hey right place and right time yeah? lol
here goes something

This song bring a lot of memories to my heart, chief amongst all is the constant reminder that my Father loves me.
thanks @luzcypher

I'll be here when it seems like your alone
keep you warm, when you feel it's too cold
take that pain, far away from you
be your friend, every other day

This is the RIGHT PLACE AND RIGHT TIME
to tell you that I care
I would only love
Love you so much more
I mean it's all I do

I'll Love you more
and more each day
until the end of time

I'll be your end whenever
I'll stand by you forever
let us stay close together now

This is the RIGHT PLACE AND RIGHT TIME
to tell you that I care
I would only love
Love you so much more
I mean it's all I do

I'll Love you more
and more each day
until the end of time

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Ahh, I can imagine sitting in a coffee house sipping on hot coffee and it's raining outside.. Keep it up!

thanks man, guess you liked it huh?
thanks for stopping by

Real good entry, man! Loved your vocals and the melody a lot! Was your guitar out of tune a bit - or is it me? Anyway, nice one, brother!

Oh my😶, I guess it was out of tune,😱 i didn't really check, had to hurriedly record the video in between classes. I didn't want my students coming in for their next class and spoiling my shoot. Lol

Thanks for watching, glad you liked it.
@passion-ground
Expect more from me...

I really like this, and the fact that you recorded this in a hurry while in between teaching classes (and that's why the guitar was out of tune- but still well played!). That's dedication! Sounds great- you have a really great voice and the lyrics are really nice. Well done man xo

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