I think you did very well. I love your lyrics. On thing I would suggest is if you had the lyrics memorized your rap would be sweet. You would look more comfortable when you do it, like you looked at the end!
Very good!
Hey bro,
Your flow was alright, could’ve been better in soem sections but sometimes your sentences run on into where the next line should have already started or you gotta tighten up your flow and keep the transitions between lines smooth. If it means rewriting a line to delivery it flawlessly then do it. Yeah I can tell you don’t sing lol but if you wanna learn, keep singing but also look up some free lessons on youtube and do some vocal warm ups.
You know I don’t agree with the contents of your lyrics and the message but I still check your music hoping you do so more positive stuff :)
thanks for the advice my brother, those were old rhymes i just decided to spit. A lot of my older stuff is darker ( bcuz i was in a dark place ) Nowadays I've been trying to write less hated and druggy lyrics
I think you did very well. I love your lyrics. On thing I would suggest is if you had the lyrics memorized your rap would be sweet. You would look more comfortable when you do it, like you looked at the end!
Very good!
Thanks friend! I'll work on that, i appreciate the feedback
Your welcome!
Re-steemed
wooo thanks for droppin for us nice stuff
your most welcome. I'm trying to get a song copyrighted so i can submit it to your hip-hop compilation. Whens the next one coming?
Hey bro,
Your flow was alright, could’ve been better in soem sections but sometimes your sentences run on into where the next line should have already started or you gotta tighten up your flow and keep the transitions between lines smooth. If it means rewriting a line to delivery it flawlessly then do it. Yeah I can tell you don’t sing lol but if you wanna learn, keep singing but also look up some free lessons on youtube and do some vocal warm ups.
You know I don’t agree with the contents of your lyrics and the message but I still check your music hoping you do so more positive stuff :)
thanks for the advice my brother, those were old rhymes i just decided to spit. A lot of my older stuff is darker ( bcuz i was in a dark place ) Nowadays I've been trying to write less hated and druggy lyrics
youre welcome bro, all good. glad you are growing more
mature and keeping in mind of what you put out in the world
What up @luzcypher, and thank you
If you have time check out my new music video-https://steemit.com/rap/@kenentertainment/new-music-video-expanding-imagination-music-video
Thanks