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RE: Open Mic Week 39 (#2): Smile by Charlie Chaplin, A Cappella
Thanks @kayclarity :) I just read your post about poetry and I'm very interested in what you think of this one. I've been working in this "sound-poem" genre to elevate the poetry tag on Steemit
I listened. It's very different for me, so I need a little time with it. Some interesting phrases for sure, and the sound idea does change the whole thing. I didn't quite get the intent of the poem's meaning, but it hovered around some things I thought could emerge with maybe a slight edit? But very interesting to listen to.
I very much appreciate this feedback @kayclarity ! My intent is to explain my belief that infinity is the deepest reality, and that this is an experiential timeline that we chose to come in and live a life on.
Pretty cool! Thanks for sharing it, and your thoughts. I did sort of get that from it.