RE: Steemit open mic week 105 - Jared Khamanah | Distinto ideal - Original Song (Reggae + Hip Hop + Electric guitar solo)
Hey, @jaredkhamanah.
You have every reason to be proud of this song. Great lyrics, the reggae works, loved the guitar solo, and you got an amazing amount of words into the hip hop part. :)
I can't think of anything in the lyrics that I disagree with. I don't think you tried to take any side of the issue, other than to stand against violence and inaction in all their forms. Personally, I think that's a message everyone should and can get behind.
Love is ultimately the answer. I just hope we don't have a long ways to get there. It can definitely seem like getting from where we are to where we need to be is more than just over the horizon. More like a planet away. :)
There used to be a time where songs were the way ideas were communicated. I'm thinking primarily during the 60s. I think we've lost that in contemporary song, which is too bad. Maybe it's time it came back. :)
@glenalbrethsen My friend I think it is necessary that I really return to that kind of compositions, thank you for reading me for real! i will continue to publish this type of songs i have a few days writing and i already have other songs ready to take them out to shoot the world, i really hope you can like them too, tomorrow i will start recording one of the ones i have been arranging, and this week i will have the opportunity to sing in one of the most important restaurants in my city, i feel that i have a commitment to have the talent to create lyrics and i want to be an instrument for the benefit of the world through music, thank you very much for the time you took to read the lyrics thank you brother!
Wow. Well good luck with the performance at the restaurant. Hopefully, that can bring more work. I'd say you have the talent for sure. It's just getting others to see it, too. I will try to make the openmic rounds more often, since I've been enjoying what I've been hearing.
One thing at a time, step by step, as they say. :)