Steemit Openmic Week 67 Claraty Original "Dream"
My computer is having serious CPU issues right now and can't make it through an entire video recording without freezing! The video craps out at the end, but the audio seems to last steadily through so I apologize for the video.
This is a new song of mine - Dream
Dream
Dream, cause we’re here to create this scene
Ah, the vision of the road we
seek is unfolding our destiny
It’s a whirling and changing
Thing, oh we believe that we’re kings and queens
Fighting the fight of the righteous
What will we become
Come back to the land
I’m constantly on a quest to
Find out the workings of the human
Mind and what causes our love to ig-
nite, and what makes men yearn to
Fight how we want there to be wrong and
Right , we’ve forgotten the joke of it
all , ancestors we call you
Chorus
Teach us the ways of the land and the spirit
Sing us the songs and the chants we can hear it
We bow to your ways and the path laid before
And ask for forgiveness so we can restore
Trust in the line between I and divine
Faith that we weren’t a mistake and mankind can
Be what it takes to walk in through the darkness
I say I’ve got you and you say we’ve got this
Verse 2
Dream, but don’t think for a moment that
We are important and higher than the
creatures who crawl or the clouds in the sky
we just breathe and try to survive
Try to deny that we don’t understand
We don’t have a plan
Past this moment
———
Dream, we are the tribe we are the magic
Team, we are the wild the free and the
Freaks, build a bridge with every word we
Speak and our kids are the ones that we
Teach brake the chains of existence
we are the movers and we are persistent
our hearts won’t resist this
ancestors we call you
Chorus
Teach us the ways of the land and the spirit
Bring us the songs and the chants we can hear it
We bow to your ways and the path laid before
And ask for forgiveness so we can restore
Trust in the line between I and divine
Faith that we weren’t a mistake and mankind can
Be what it takes to walk in through the darkness
I say I’ve got you and you say we’ve got this
You have an enchanting voice Claraty, the lyrics are also brilliant. I really enjoyed your performance. Good luck !
Enjoy the vote and reward!
i just really love the original works, because the musicians leave some part of them in every single note and lyric on the works they do, this is a really pasional song, and your voice represents it, keep in that way.
Love your voice!I will follow you from this moment!
Good post! .. I will follow you, please follow me too and we help each other ... I would appreciate a vote in my last post thanks https://steemit.com/openmic/@palmimusic/steemit-open-mic-week-67-vals-venezolano-n2-antonio-laurocover
What divinely beautiful lyrics and your delivery pulls me in.
Yeeahyah!!! This is a beautiful song. Love love.
Very good post ..
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You really right quite well...
Lyrics are always powerful and crafty.
Voice is on point too and I know you've got some interesting ways to use it. Some very delicate in this particular tune
BTW, I noticed that you are not in the Songwriter's Challenge...(or at least I'm pretty sure you aren't). Did you know about it?
I've found it to be quite the challenge thus far.
Thank you! I saw the songwriter's challenge too late, it had already started! Looks challenging and fun for sure. I'll go check out some of your entries!
Ah too bad. I'm sure they will run it again. It seemed quite successful first time around. This is the final week of this bout.
Let’s keep DREAMING it’s for free.
I really like your voice. Keep sharing 😊