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RE: Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week #1
yesss! I love the way mirror, killer and sinner all rhyme. Was that on purpose? It really helps to cement the first line of each verse with a really familiar feeling. Lovely song :) x
Thank you so much for your kind words, the almost rhyme wasn't planned but when I thought about them it felt the right word to put there, if you know what I mean, my songwriting is very intuitive and I don't analyse too much when I write.