Steemit open mic week 45... All in a dream ( original song )

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

Hello my friends.

This is my entry to open mic week 45

This is an old Silk route song that we composed back in 1995. Played once or twice in a show but then was forgotten because our audience by then wanted to hear covers mostly.

The lyrics were written by our mentor Mohit Satyanand who in the early years of the band got us all together and pushed us into performing our songs.

Thank you @luzcypher and @pfunk for organizing open mic. If you want to know more about open mic please check this out :
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Lyrics:

All in a dream

On a summer night so dry
When leaves crumble to dust
On a ridge of oak and pine
My shoes stop at her door.

Kneel down and touch her feet
A doorway opens wide
You lose yourself in her
Not ready for her love tonight.

Walk away walk away walk away
There’s a whisper in my ear that says
Not ready for her love tonight. X 2

Walls are soft with ancient smoke
And a fire of fragrant pine
You offer all your gold
She’s not ready for your love.

Walk away walk away walk away
There’s a whisper in my ear that says
Not ready for her love tonight. X 2

Enjoy !!!

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I love your song as always. Powerful! May you win the openmic!

Thank you so much for your support Diabolika. It really means a lot.
Peace and love !!!

Really draws on the emotions...the longing...you did it again @atulmittal! :) SMiles!!

Thank you Lyndsay for your kind words. I am happy that you like the song.
Peace and love !!!

This is really good, sounds great. You have a nice voice, it's a very chilled song, and you sing it with feeling :)

Thank you for your kind words and support. I am happy that you like the song.
Cheers !!!

wow, that was really good. great voice, great playing, great writing and i like the campfire background. very nice touch, it really sets the mood.

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Thank you Aaron for your kind words really mean a lot. Keep rocking brother.
Peace !!!

This is lovely!

Thank you Aranyaka.
Cheers !!!

Awesome as always! Very soulful. Keep on creating!

Thank you Nick for appreciating and commenting.
Cheers !!!

that was bad that those people didn't wanted original songs in 95 , you are a great musician and singer and I know you were also great in that time , and about this song I most say that it's so emotional and I really enjoyed listening to it , perfect performance , I most like that Walk away chords and singing part ... \m/ Rock On !

Thank you David for your words and support. Original music is not main stream so it was a difficult time for us as a band. Really had to make changes in the song line up for shows. The audience here in India is more film music oriented. Any way was good fun.
Cheers !!!

That's great man , so you live in India , good place , I am really glad to meet you here , you are a real pro Musician and singer.

Deep brother... Love the lyrics, composition, and inferences all across the board.... what a wonder piece!

Thank you @passion-ground for your compliments. I am always happy to hear from you.
Peace bro !!!

The lyrics and music... just beautiful!

Thank you donatello for listening and appreciating.
Peace bro !!!

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Thank you @luzcypher for making it happen.

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