Steemit Open Mic week 55 - Original, Holy
I wrote this song about a love that's almost not tangible. As if there were no such thing as touch, the words would still be enough and even holy. Hope you all enjoy!
Starlight in the haze you make me behave
I don't know how to stop this but I wanna misbehave
Get to know you
I unfold you
Holding on to this all right
Overdue now
I feel somehow
I could do this all night
(2x)
Holy holy holy holy
Your words are your words are
Critics will say it'll fade away but
I know I won't see you go
Words are all I need let's not play make believe cause I feel you in my soul
You call me out when I'm not right
And I don't think twice about it
Don't know how to fight you all I'd do light you up when I feel rotted
My arms call to you
Like they knew you
Better than the rest of them
Future free now
I let go how
You know it's no attempt
Critics will say it'll fade away but
I know I won't see you go
Words are all I need let's not play make believe cause I feel you in my soul
And I don't know how to let you go so fastly
You know that I don't wanna make this a disaster
So stay with me, so stay with me for a while
(2x)
Holy holy holy holy
Your words are your words are
Critics will say it'll fade away but
I know I won't see you go
Words are all I need let's not play make believe cause I feel you in my soul
Congratulations @addiesworld! You won 2nd in Syeemit Open MIc! Click the image to go to the post.
Wow thank you so much!!:)
Congrats again! Your songs are well liked. Keep it up.
I ain't misbehavin' here... Holy Moly... This is great.... Loved it!
Holy Moly is right! You've got a stellar voice. Very radio-ready. You should sing on stage, girl!
Thanks so much! I actually try to sing on stage as much as I can:) You are so sweet!
Love your stuff!... You write some serious catchy songs... Great vocals with great meaningful lyrics!
Thank you so much!:) I really apprec
what a treat to my ears @addiesworld , im going to have this stuck in my head for hours!
That's the goal;) Haha I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for listening!
I think I could just lay on the floor and listen to you play all night, and that would be enough to feel redeemed.
Thank you
Agreed.
I'm so sorry I am just seeing this (I'm still trying to figure this steemit stuff out). Thank you SO very much oh my gosh, you are too kind:)
I love the lyrics, looked like a video was there but it never loaded..
Maybe I'll do a guitar version is that ok with you? @addiesworld
Wow! You play piano too.
What a fantastic entry
I have included you in my top list post for this week
Check it out here
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-55-original-blog
Oh wow! Thank you so much for including me:) Means the world!
You are very welcome, you make it easy to do so.
oh girl you got a lovely sound. wonderful song. no one is ever gonna take from you this gift. not anyone. I feel you in my soul
Wow that was the best compliment I have ever received, seriously thank you:)
You've been pumping out some really written tunes since you've arrived. I approve ;)