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RE: Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!

in #odtasks6 years ago
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Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

  • SuperRare is not a game, it was miscategorized on State of the DApps, oops 🤭
  • Please understand that you can be criticial: if you spot a mistake, don’t hold back and mention it in your review!
  • You misspelled the name “stateofdapps”, it is called State of the DApps; always be careful to spell names correctly.
  • In a review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should use a dapp. This is missing in your article.
  • Good choice of images, but they can be placed to better contribute to the story, the list at the end lacks context.
  • Title and category are okay, but it is not a game, so don’t tag it as such, art would be a better fit.
  • I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article.
  • "Full information in the link below". Something nobody ever says on Twitter. You could learn a bit more how to use Twitter, people tend to be brief.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

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