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RE: Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!

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     6 years ago 

    Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

    • Great introduction and story, but mentioning Oracle-D is a big no-no for their tasks!
    • After the embedded gameplay trailer video, your article falls a bit apart. It feels rushed and there is no conclusion. I would love to read how your story really ends :)
    • In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing.
    • I get the feeling that you are trying to be too complex with your language, don't say "for your perusal" in a game review.
    • The chosen screenshots are a bit chaotic, different sizes and styles. Not well mixed with the story.
    • Title, category and tags are okay.
    • I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article.
    • Tweet has too many tags, looks like spam.

    Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

    Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐

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     6 years ago 

    Thanks for the review. I would be sure to implement the points you dropped in my next review.
    About the tags, it was suggested in the guideline post, but I would cut it down in my next post.
    Many thanks

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