Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Good story telling, it reads very easily.
In a game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. You mentioned some of this in your conclusion, but I’d like to read more of your personal feedback!
Images are well chosen with a good mix of flavour pictures and in-game screenshots.
Nice title, category and tags. Not sure why you added indonesia though, as it has nothing to do with the game.
Your Tweet is not directly related to the review.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Thanks for the feedback
I use Indonesia tags because i'm an Indonesian and i'm sure that Indonesian people will read it, a lot of gamers from Indonesia.
For the twitter I thought it refer to the game and I was promoting for the people to search the game using StateOfTheDApps.com
And no there is no big deal. Right?
Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
indonesiathough, as it has nothing to do with the game.Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🎻🎻🎻
Thanks for the feedback
I use Indonesia tags because i'm an Indonesian and i'm sure that Indonesian people will read it, a lot of gamers from Indonesia.
For the twitter I thought it refer to the game and I was promoting for the people to search the game using StateOfTheDApps.com
And no there is no big deal. Right?
No bid deal, just a remark 😊
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Btw, thanks to putting a comment, it means that my review is worthy for everyone.
So, next time I will write better than before.