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RE: Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!

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Thanks for the advice, I will try to improve that in the future 🙂

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Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

  • Your article is not really a review, more a list of features (you calls it a beginner guide).
  • In your title you are very positive about the game, but you don't tell us why.
  • In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
  • The screenshots are well chosen, although a bit over-compressed. Look into JPEG compression to see how you can improve that in the future.
  • State of the DApps doesn't perfectly fit in the story, it is more added as an afterthought.
  • Tweet is lacking flavour, has no text. With too many tags it looks like spam.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks & reviews!

Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐

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