Yes, I see improvement for sure! Next time I would pay special attention on reeaaaallly zeroing in on those smaller forms and sharpening some edges. I would also constantly keep in mind the concept of raking light. When turning form, you want to be aware that your lightest lights are going to be brighter on his head for example, as compared to his calves as of course his head is closer to the light source :)
When turning form, it is best in thinking of it that you always want to finish them in one pass, directly as possible.
Is it okay? This is a treasure of mine. I do have a frame with me, but I am still trying to build the form a bit better. :)
Yes, I see improvement for sure! Next time I would pay special attention on reeaaaallly zeroing in on those smaller forms and sharpening some edges. I would also constantly keep in mind the concept of raking light. When turning form, you want to be aware that your lightest lights are going to be brighter on his head for example, as compared to his calves as of course his head is closer to the light source :)
When turning form, it is best in thinking of it that you always want to finish them in one pass, directly as possible.