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RE: Learn again... 5 Minute #Freewrite: Prompt: window

in #nextcolony5 years ago

Beautiful beginning to a story of humanity venturing beyond our point of origin - I love view out the spaceship window of other colony ships passing in the darkness (presumably visible only because they're lit up). Magical piece! And you remind of Corinthians 13, donning the breastplate of this and the armor of that, when you write,

In my shop window there are several models of costumes.
One says love
I have to start dressing up with these new suits.
They will make us learn these new feelings.

And this is cool:

Ancient people, in fact, were part of the first humans.
But then they disappeared in such a way that now they are labeled as new

My understanding is that some who disappeared, e.g. Neanderthals, did so by mingling with us. The originals are gone. Some humans have no Neanderthal DNA, but other humans do (and redheads are said to have Neanderthal origins). But I digress!

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Greetings @carolkean

Thanks for your beautiful comment.
All my writings are influenced by the Bible, it is the first thing I read and study when I get up.

That day he had read the writings of the Apostle Paul.

“But, besides all these things, clothe yourselves with love, for it is a perfect bond of union.”​ -COLOSSIOS 3:14.

"Strip off the old personality with its practices, and clothe yourselves with the new personality, which through accurate knowledge is being made new according to the image of the One who created it.”​ (Colossians 3: 8-10).

“The fruitage of the spirit is love, joy, peace, long-suffering, kindness, goodness, faith, mildness, self-control.”(Galatians 5:22, 23).

Those texts were my study that morning.

Yes, they definitely influenced my writing.

Thanks for; see beyond what is obvious.

I use a translator.

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