That's good. I'm suggesting the full text in this particular video (which is only 7 minutes) it should have been about 8 paragraphs, but that gives lots of related keywords for Google to see context. Plus it gives speed-reading scrollers (like myself) to jump up, down, through the text and then hit play.

I hate reading a teaser of text, then having to hit play, to see if the teaser has any substance to it. I normally avoid pushing play if all I get is a teaser in text.