Those eary birds, I don't think I will ever understand them. Perhaps they belong in a different time zone :>)

A thought track, I like that. As you might know by now, I'm the type of person/ writer who just goes with the flow ( without a plan ), following inspiration, intuition and building momentum. I plan to piece it all together, in the end and deal with the rough edges.

The story looks like it’s developing nicely

I can't complain :>)